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How can I, a simple man, describe the beauty that is you?
I may not do well, but I shall do my best
Your hair is like a golden field of—
Wait
Your hair isn't golden
Or blonde
Better move on.

Your eyes are like two plain blank sheets of paper
Wait, that sounds mean
I'll come back to that later.

Is it even possible to describe a nose in a way that makes it sound good?
Probably not
I'll skip the nose

Your lips are like two caterpillars
But hairless
And not bug-like
Or crawly
So, your lips are nothing like two caterpillars.

Looking back at what I did, would this be thought of as a love poem?
I think not
Maybe I should stop writing love poems entirely
But that's not why I wrote this
I wrote this because I love someone
And that someone is you
But just because my poem is bad,
Doesn't mean my love for you is the same way
I love you
Love Poem
My version of poetry written to woo a lover
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Months. No, wait: check that. Year. Feels to me like it's been ages. But guess who's back???? No really. Guess. Come on, give it your best shot.
Yes, I'm back. And I'm not going to say I'm better then ever. That would be exaggerating. I have improved though. Times have changed. As have I.
So, expect more stories and poetry (attempts) in the near future, and be warned: they might not be the best stuff out there.
But it should be good enough for you to enjoy. So do that. Sit back, relax, and enjoy.
Months. No, wait: check that. Year. Feels to me like it's been ages. But guess who's back???? No really. Guess. Come on, give it your best shot.
Yes, I'm back. And I'm not going to say I'm better then ever. That would be exaggerating. I have improved though. Times have changed. As have I.
So, expect more stories and poetry (attempts) in the near future, and be warned: they might not be the best stuff out there.
But it should be good enough for you to enjoy. So do that. Sit back, relax, and enjoy.

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Nathan
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United States
My name is Nathan. I am not insane (for the most part). I am a jack-of-all-trades and a big fan of Steampunk and stuff like that. I have nothing else to say.
Random YouTube page: m.youtube.com/channel/UCRPyLhj…
Random Flickr page: m.flickr.com/#/photos/95765974…
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Treo-LeGigeo Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013   Writer
Hello there!

This is :devTreo-LeGigeo: from the Two Thousand Words project. Writers draft submissions are nearing their final deadline, with artist claims starting very soon. I haven't heard anything from you, so I was wondering if you're still planning to participate?
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DJKiana Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Thanks for the watch! ;w;
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Link-Rar Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student General Artist
No problem. It's what I do.
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AnnieBird Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the watch! :iconiloveyouplz:
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Link-Rar Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student General Artist
No problem
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valgal5567 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student Artist
Thanks for the watch! :)
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